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Little broken me
Raped of my future
Baffled in the derby
Lost in my nature

And so I sing to you
Out of pure confusion
I know nothing to be true
For it is all a delusion

Little broken me
Pitiful to look at
Lost from insanity
So I am now crooked

Swimming in my organs
Leading to my heart
Mislaid in my course again
And each a different part

Little broken me
Unlike all the rest
For I ruined my sanity
It bled through my chest

Wading through the water
Of life and little deaths
Committing little murders
Until no one is left
©2004-2009 ~dying-inside
:icondying-inside:

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got bored....heh....no life waht so ever....

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:iconpoolofshadows:
Dude that is real deep I write alot of poetry like that . And I have to say that is a really good poem
:icondying-inside:
why thank you...ill look at what youve got! :poke:

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The Plastic Revalution is here.
:iconstevedave04:
love the repitition of the little broken me line, works so well in making this a wonderful poem! :)

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If you're frightened of dying and...
And you're holding on, you'll see devils tearing your life away. But if you've made your peace, then the devils are really angels,
freeing you from the earth.
:icondying-inside:
thank you so very much......muah!

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The Plastic Revalution is here.
:iconstevedave04:
:( no lick? just a kiss??? :kiss: :lick:

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If you're frightened of dying and...
And you're holding on, you'll see devils tearing your life away. But if you've made your peace, then the devils are really angels,
freeing you from the earth.
:icondying-inside:
ill lick you later!.....you just wait!itll be a good one!

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The Plastic Revalution is here.
:iconstevedave04:
:love: ooohh cant wait !!

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If you're frightened of dying and...
And you're holding on, you'll see devils tearing your life away. But if you've made your peace, then the devils are really angels,
freeing you from the earth.
:icondying-inside:
where are you???? and why arent you online????

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The Plastic Revalution is here.
:iconeyesonthesky:
oh my mollipop... such great work..... very awsome

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